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A quarterly of long-form criticism about how story-driven games are built, and about the point in the second half where a plot either holds or stops holding.

Essay · long read

The Sagging Middle Is A Budget Decision Wearing A Narrative Costume

The mid-game slump is usually described as a writing problem, on the grounds that second acts are difficult. I think it is better understood as a production problem: the middle of a long game is where content made to fill a runtime is stored, and filling a runtime is a different job from telling a story, given to the same hours.

A traveller crossing a long stone bridge over a misty gorge, halfway across, in flat overcast light
The middle of the bridge: the part with the least to look at and the most distance in both directions.

There is a point in most long games, somewhere between the halfway mark and two-thirds of the way through, at which the thing stops pulling. The plot has been established, the world has been opened, the systems are all in hand, and what remains before the final movement is a stretch of hours that feel like work rather than like a story continuing.

The received explanation is that second acts are hard. This is true of every narrative medium and explains nothing specific about games, since the games in question frequently have excellent first and third acts written by the same people. If the difficulty were purely one of craft, we would expect it to be distributed more evenly.

Where runtime comes from

A long game has a runtime expectation attached to it before very much of it exists. Thirty hours, forty, sometimes considerably more, and that number is a commitment made to a market rather than a conclusion reached by a story.

The first act cannot absorb the excess, because its job is to teach and it is watched too closely to pad. The third act cannot absorb it either, because it has to accelerate towards a conclusion and anything inserted there is conspicuous. That leaves the middle, which is spacious, structurally undefined, and reached by fewer people than the opening.

So the middle absorbs it. Not as a decision anybody defends in those terms, but as the residue of a hundred smaller decisions about where a new region, a new set of objectives or a reused encounter type can be placed without damaging anything.

ActPrimary jobCapacity to absorb runtime
FirstTeach systems, establish premiseVery low; watched closely
SecondUndefined; complicate the premiseVery high; spacious and unobserved
ThirdAccelerate and concludeLow; insertions are conspicuous

The middle of a long game is the only part with room, which is why everything with nowhere else to go ends up there.

What the density shows

For each of the eight games examined here I recorded the interval between narratively consequential events, meaning events after which the plot's situation was different. The measure is crude and it is mine, but it is consistent across the sample and the shape it produces is the same shape in every case.

In the first quarter of each game, consequential events arrive on average every thirty-five to fifty minutes. In the final quarter, every twenty-five to forty. In the middle half, the interval widens to between eighty minutes and, in the worst of the eight, a little over three hours.

That widening is the sag, described numerically. Nothing is wrong with the writing in those intervals; there is simply less writing per hour, because the hours were added for a different reason.

Portion of gameInterval between consequential eventsGames in sample
First quarter35 to 50 minutes8 of 8
Middle half80 minutes to 3 hours7 of 8
Final quarter25 to 40 minutes8 of 8

The one game that did not sag

One of the eight held its interval steady from beginning to end, at roughly forty-five minutes, and it did so by being twelve hours long rather than thirty-five.

This is not a trick and it is not modesty. The game made a decision about how much story it had and then declined to be longer than that, which meant its middle had nothing to absorb. Every hour in it is doing the same job that its first hour does.

I am aware that this observation sounds like an argument for shorter games, and in a narrow sense it is. But the more precise version is that the sag is a consequence of a mismatch between story volume and runtime commitment, and that mismatch can be resolved from either direction. A thirty-five hour game with thirty-five hours of story would not sag either.

Two ways of filling the middle honestly

Two of the eight games sag much less than the others without being short, and both do it by giving the middle a job of its own rather than treating it as a corridor between the interesting parts.

The first makes its second act about consolidation. The plot deliberately stops advancing and the hours are spent building relationships, holdings and capability, with the explicit understanding that this is what the middle is for. Because the game says so, and because its systems reward it, the widening interval between plot events reads as intentional rather than as absence.

The second uses its middle to complicate the premise rather than to extend it. Every mid-game sequence takes something the first act established and makes it less simple: an ally becomes a liability, a resource becomes a debt, a place becomes unsafe. None of these require large assets. They require only that the middle be planned as a sequence of reversals rather than a set of locations.

Middle-act strategyGamesEffect on the sag
Corridor between acts one and three5Pronounced sag
Middle as consolidation, stated1Widening reads as intentional
Middle as sequence of reversals1Interval stays narrow
Short enough not to need a middle1No sag recorded

Why the diagnosis matters

If the sag is a writing problem, the remedy is better writers, which is both unhelpful and unlikely to be the constraint. If it is a production problem, the remedy is a decision made early about how much story a game has and how long it is therefore going to be.

That decision is uncomfortable because runtime is a selling point and story volume is not. But the games in this sample that hold their grip are precisely the ones where somebody appears to have made it, and the ones that sag are the ones where a number arrived from outside and the middle was asked to accommodate it.

The argument in one sentence

Mid-game slump is what a runtime commitment looks like when it exceeds a story's volume, and it lands in the second act because the second act is the only part of a long game with room to hide it.